Score: 0

"Yeesh, what a circlejerk."

submission: Anamnesis

date: January 3, 2008

So much drama over NG in this one flash. Were you ever right when you stated this was overrated.

Score: 3

"Forgettable, another Superhero Parody."

submission: Protectors of Tomorrow

date: January 3, 2008

More illustrated radio. The illustrations weren't that funny when they were obviously trying to be, the writing was embarrassingly awful, the voices weren't the least bit unique; with weak knowledge of these tools in the first place, you can't even separate this parody from many others.

I feel like I am watching a slideshow with occasional black holes moving on the people's faces. You couldn't feel any real energy, and you can't really care about the characters because they don't do anything to specify themselves and to stand out from the basic character types, in this case the anti-hero.

Nothing personal towards the flash makers, many, many people on Newgrounds simply make movies like these without any thought, albeit some put less effort than others.

What I suggest to you, FronkNDego, is to find ways to make people laugh without using words. I don't mean make characters move as if they were playing charades, but by mere body language and expression alone, convey what this will be about and hiding the story telling tools by covering it with fun stuff.

Good luck working on your next installment of this series.

Score: 2

"Wow, this was a really, REALLY boring movie."

submission: KFK's Adventures #12

date: November 8, 2007

It's a slideshow with audio, not a flash movie. Next time, try animating some people and what not.